All Roads Lead to Hikawa
Tsukino-san got the bracelet back to Rei-san, but that’s not even half of it.
She went again today to take the bracelet back…but well…it turns out Rei-san is the priestess at the Hikawa shrine (the shrine that’s curse has been blamed for all the missing girls). Tsukino-san said there were some girls picking on Rei-san, but she managed to dissuade them away, before she came to meet me. I was checking up on the pattern of the girls who were going missing.
We had an interesting time…because the girls going missing had all been mikos at an event the Hikawa Shrine had recently. Then we saw Rei-san also there. We had some very tense time where we disguised ourself as mikos also and were wondering if maybe Rei-san was also a youma, and thought we might have to fight with her, and that was just a bad thought. I was hoping if she was maybe she was a youma the way sensei had been a youma and we could cure her.
Fortunately she wasn’t a youma. While Moon and she were in a strange portal the youma had opened up to trap the kidnapped girls in Rei-san found her own well of power. Hers was centered around fire, and she became the senshi of Mars! Unfortunately she doesn’t feel that she needs to work with us. She left on rather nasty terms with us. I suppose there are some personalities that Tsukino-san’s bounciness wouldn’t go over very well with, and Rei-san’s is one of them.
Tsukino-san was more than a little disheartened by the brush off, but I have a feeling she’ll bounce back.
I wouldn’t feel right commenting on something to bizarre and personal as quarrels with your friends or fellow ’senshi’, and in any case I wouldn’t know what to say, so I’ll cop out and correct your grammar again. :p
You have been doing very well, but this phrase lept out at me: “the shrine that’s curse has been blamed”. I understand that you’re trying to indicate the curse associated with the shrine, but the way it was written comes off as ‘the shrine that is curse has been blamed’, which makes no sense. Try something like ‘the shrine with the supposed curse that has been blamed’. ^_^
- S. V.
Comment by Seres Victoria — October 24, 2004 @ 5:08 am
Thank you again. Perhaps I should call you Seres-sensei?
Comment by Ami — October 24, 2004 @ 2:10 pm
Oh, I wouldn’t feel right being called sensei! I’m not much older than you, if at all.
- S. V.
Comment by Seres Victoria — October 27, 2004 @ 5:14 am